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Matthew Barros
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Very fair. To clarify, the manuscript section is to give context to the outline, but I see why that is confusing. I don’t intend for these brilliant comedians to read from a script, obviously they don’t need it. What they do need however is structure, and I wasn’t sure how to convey that in any other way than a hypothetical scenario. If you have any ideas in that regard, I’m all ears. Providing a structure in an effective way dramatically improves the show, I’m just not sure how they do it. Also, writing “Some positives:” and then listing one positive is the most hilariously brutal comment so far. Step it up juggalos!